highlight innovation. On the other hand, we each individual should cultivate this kind of
viewpoint since our childhood, by which means we could be bestowed with a bright and
promising future! (175words)
[作文题目]
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition of no less than
150 words on the topic "Whether CollegeStudents Should Be Allowed to Get Married" and
you' re your article onthe following outline.
1. Choose either of the two positions: College students should (not) be allowed to get
married.
2. State your reasons for or against the issue
3. Conclusion
范文
Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?
There isno denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whethercollege students
should be allowved to get married. Some time ago, theban was lfted by some universities on
students getting married. Tothis people' s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive
view.They say that most college students are adults and that it is a basicright for those who
have reached the appropriate ages to get married.Besides, they argue that with their
biological and emotional needs met,these students will study better. The ban on this means a
severeviolation of human rights.
Many others, however, hold the negative opposite view. Theyclaim that the university or
college is a place to study instead of acommunity to lead family life. Allowing college
students to get marriedwould adversely affect their study. For instance, they would spend
toomuch time attending their family and love, unable to concentrate ontheir school work.
As far as | am concerned, Weighing the arguments of both sides, I believe that itis OK to
allow college students to get married. Anyway,this is their freedom. Actually, we don' t have
to worry too muchbecause facts have shown that most college students would choose not
toget married in the face of such fierce competition and heavy schoolwork.

句型结构错误
句型结构错误主要分为句子缺乏成分和句子结构多余两种情况。例如“我们应该参加各类对我们成长有利的实践活动”，错误翻译为“Weshouldtakeartinp Enlishexam”，这是句子结构存在错误，正确的应该是“We should take part in practical activities which are beneficial to our growth.”。还有句子结构多余的情况，如“In my opinion I think the best way to stay beautiful is doing sports.”中，“In my opinion”和“I think”意义重复，用词过于累赘。要避免句型结构错误，在学习英语句型时要理解句子的基本结构，在写作时确保句子结构完整且简洁，写完后可以通过读句子来检查是否通顺。
（三）中式英语错误及规避
逐字翻译
很多学生在写作时会按照汉语的语序和结构进行逐字翻译，从而产生中式英语。例如“打他的脸”，不能写成“beat his face”，而应该是“hit him in the face”或者“strike him on the face”。为了避免逐字翻译，要多学习英语的习惯表达方式，通过阅读英语文章、学习英语例句等方式来积累。在写作时，要从英语的思维角度出发，思考如何用英语准确表达自己的意思，而不是简单地将汉语直接翻译成英语。
受汉语习惯影响的表达
在一些表达上，受汉语习惯的影响，会写出不符合英语习惯的句子。例如“我认为保持美丽的最好方法就是运动”写成“I think the best way to keep beautiful is do sports.”，正确的是“I think the best way to keep beautiful is to do sports.”。要克服这种错误，就要深入了解英汉两种语言在表达习惯上的差异，多模仿英语中的正确表达，逐渐养成用英语思维写作的习惯。
（四）衔接与逻辑错误及规避
连接词误用
学生在写作中常常会出现连接词误用的情况，如“although…but”“because…so”等连用的错误。汉语的复合句讲究对称，连接句子的关联词往往成对出现，但英语的复合句只需要一个连词放在一个从句中就能起到连接作用。例如“Although it was raining heavily, he still went to school.”不能写成“Although it was raining heavily, but he still went to school.”。在学习连接词时，要准确掌握其用法，在写作时注意避免连接词的错误搭配。
逻辑混乱
有些作文会存在逻辑混乱的问题，例如在论述一个观点时，论据与论点不相关或者论述顺序不合理。为了使文章逻辑清晰，在写作前可以先列提纲，明确文章的结构和论述顺序。在论述过程中，要确保每个论据都能有力地支持论点，并且论据之间要有一定的逻辑性。例如在写议论文时，可以按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序进行论述。